Monday, April 20, 2009

Agent for a Day

My query was picked for Nathan Bransford's Agent for a Day.
I will the first to admit it wasn't ready to go since it was a first draft (and a couple people caught that), but I couldn't turn down an opportunity to get some feedback.
And get feedback I did. A big thanks to everyone who left specific comments.

The biggest thing people didn't like was the sci-fi terminology. How much to include was (is) something I struggle with. I love it when authors just drop me into their worlds, but the query may not be the place to do that. Thoughts?

I'm back to work on it putting all the great advice to polish it up.

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